Rural Lad’s Forbidden Tryst with City-Bred Stepsister Shivani

NOT!READERReport 2007-05-25 11:34:14WTF? Porn video Go get a job driving a cab and leave the porn writing to people who know how to do it. How dumb can a story be? You couldn’t even write a grocery list, much less a decent porn story. 0/10READERReport 2007-05-25 19:01:55You won’t sell this crapREADERReport 2007-05-25 18:54:30Brilliant Story, man keep them coming… How dumb can a story be? Go get a job driving a cab and leave the porn writing to people who know how to do it. NOT!READERReport 2007-05-25 11:34:14WTF? So bad I c ouldn’t even belive what I was reading ha ha ha ha ha hahahaha. . . . . . …but seriously no just no.READERReport 2007-06-02 07:02:54Let me add my : what the fuck was this all about?