Aged and weathered, taken hard outdoors by her stepson

It’s just bad. Too much badly translated American tv in your nation. XXX And parents who name their children Jimmy and Timmy, ugh rhymers. This isn’t even so bad it’s good. Really, really bad, especially since your syntax is all off. No cadence, no flow. And parents who name their children Jimmy and Timmy, ugh rhymers. I’d say try harder but, no, please no more abominations like this.«1» You should have used which instead.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-06 10:13:09English isn’t your first language is it? You should have used which instead.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-06 10:13:09English isn’t your first language is it? And parents who name their children Jimmy and Timmy, ugh rhymers.