Punished Pupil Savors Professor’s Seed

most of this is true some parts are a little stretched. i also know its rape i was convicted of this and spent some time in a treatment facility for it. XXX I would highly recommend that you continue writing but PLEASE find an editor program to assist you in the future.«123» Your sentence structure and punctuation are horrible. i also know its rape i was convicted of this and spent some time in a treatment facility for it. 14 comments«123»greencarnage13Report 2011-01-19 03:44:40i loved ur story but wat happen who opened the door n came in n did ya get caught i want 2 read of wat happen nextgreencarnage13Report 2011-01-19 03:44:28i loved ur story but wat happen who opened the door n came in n did ya get caught i want 2 read