Blonde Surfer Babe Wanted for a Long, Hard Ride – Dakota Lyn

Def would have hurt you.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-26 06:07:11Please proof your story. Vxxx You should definitely make a part two. A spell check run would have caught many errors. Also, think about continuity and having even a fantasy make sense.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-25 21:42:31Pretty great story. Def would have hurt you.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-26 06:07:11Please proof your story. Def would have hurt you.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-26 06:07:11Please proof your story. Also, think about continuity and having even a fantasy make sense.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-25 21:42:31Pretty great story. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-09-06 11:10:21It would have been an alright story line if u knew how to write properly. There was no flow to the story. You should definitely make a part two.