Busty Sheila Grant drenched in thick, dripping cream

I apologize for shooting my keyboard off without knowing what I was typing about. XXX 23 comments«12345»Wildfire1180Report 2020-06-13 04:58:37That was a great story!!Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-03 12:57:21Loved it can’t wait for part twoAnonymous readerReport 2009-11-30 07:19:55I would have preferred a more positive response to the gift he was given, mind you it was probably more realistic this way. Constructive criticism: try double-spacing between paragraphs and lines of dialogue. The comment was snarky, and was trying to act like it was a constructive, when it wasn’t. There is little that alienates readers more than hubris. Also, my comments about the author’s gender were out of line, as it has nothing to do with the story.