An hour of steamy homemade passion with a 35-year-old couple
Very fast. This was difficult to read. Vxxx This was just absolute shit, if you consider writing another story take my advice… But as a writer, I’d say it wasn’t your bag.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 14:18:26You need to learn the definition of “best” as your name is completely wrong.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 14:16:02I couldn’t get very far with the horindous destruction of the english language that was going on. Thanks or sharing the story. Between the constant use of wrong words everywhere and the absolutely screwed up structering of phrases. Between the constant use of wrong words everywhere and the absolutely screwed up structering of phrases. PLEASE either learn english or wait till you finish middle school before you even attempt writing again. It was a cute story. But as a writer, I’d say it
