Bow Down to Queen Reeses’ Massive Natural Melons, Dedicated to Gooners
HOW OLD ARE THEY? It stands good on its own but I’d like to see you edit it and add more. Xxx video personality and character traits, how they interact in normal situations, etc. WHAT KIND OF RELATIONSHIP DID THEY HAVE BEFORE THIS? DO THEY KEEP FUCKING OR WAS IT A ONE TIME THING? DO THE PARENTS FIND OUT? I’d still give 5 stars for the story and look forward to part 2. WHO ARE THEY? DID THEY EVER FEEL ANYTHING FOR EACH OTHER BEFORE THIS? AS IS THIS WAS WAY TO SHORT AND WAY TO RUSHED AND NEEDS TO BE DELETED.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-15 21:15:41not good this reads like it should be chapter two not one. HOW OLD ARE THEY? A longer build up would help, i.e. delete and rewrite using a good
