I couldn’t resist, I had to explode all over my step sis, she’s just that perfect
Overall, if the story had ended before the email from her dad I would have been completely satisfied. XXX 5 s«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-04 12:25:20Loved the story, hated the ending. It just didn’t make sense that an 18 year old (or nearly so if she’s graduating) could not contact him if she really cared about him. Also, there is no injunction that her dad could get besides a restraining order, and that would only last until she’s 18. Also, there is no injunction that her dad could get besides a restraining order, and that would only last until she’s 18. then you proceed to use Another five pages to describe the same fucking thing damn man you are a much better writer than that! she looks for him, finds him, and they reignite
