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Me and my friend John have been friends since 2nd grade. Vxxx He got all sad and started to cry. I need to know how I can make my story’s better, and how I can make them more steamy ;). It was the best thing ive felt in a while. He got all sad and started to cry. “John, I am about to cum” I whispered. I felt something bulging at my back…IT WAS HIS DICK! It was so strange, and my head was spinning. ***This is my first story, please leave s on how I can make it better** I am new at this, So please be nice and polite.