Sister-in-law’s steamy affair with the neighbor

Bad grammar and slang usage establish local color and help develop the characters. XXX At the start of the story, in the intro when you said you “write porn with a plot” first thought to come to my mind was “you write porn with pony ass”?Report 2015-01-19 14:10:51Hey “COACH” – Mark Twain would never have published if editors had your attitude. Bad grammar and slang usage establish local color and help develop the characters. Good story, though.Report 2016-11-16 14:42:02Nice job keep it upReport 2016-09-03 03:31:01Sorry, I’m a Brony. Breathe is the verb, well, except in this sentence. At the start of the story, in the intro when you said you “write porn with a plot” first thought to come to my mind was “you write porn with pony ass”?Report 2015-01-19 14:10:51Hey “COACH” – Mark Twain