Alice’s Wonderland: A Rabbit’s Carrot Fills Her Cosplay Fantasy

At the start of the story, the parents are strict Christians who are appalled at the daughter dressing in a slutty way and by the end the parents are fucking her, but there is no explanation for why the parents change. The story doesn’t develop in any way that makes any sense.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-26 01:37:53In three places you put AND instead of HAD. Xxx video Thanks for sharing your story with us.«1» Are you planning a series with this story? You should read through it, aloud if that helps, before publishing, to see how these shifts in narration detract from the story. The story doesn’t develop in any way that makes any sense.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-26 01:37:53In three places you put AND instead of HAD.