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They could have gone out to Dennys it is after all Sunday,Both Parents Work On Sunday, heaven forbid if anyone goes to Church. Also was a little short but all in all a good storyanonymous readerReport 2011-05-05 20:27:58pretty good 7/10. XXX Good Try Go for part 2, Good 1st try. put more romance into it, and a little buildup.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-05 00:16:55Like the or below me said, you can do this, but you need to work on proofreading what you have written.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-28 08:33:38You need to Proofread, Spell Check, Keep the Gender Stright, keep the story flow stright and your good to go. They could have gone out to Dennys it is after all Sunday,Both Parents Work On Sunday, heaven forbid if anyone goes to Church.